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Posted by: cbenitah Sep 2 2006, 06:25 PM

I have been looking at these for a while now and can't make up my mind.. They ar going to be a flyer you hand out. . . .

Thankful for various input. . . .

Posted by: cbenitah Sep 2 2006, 06:26 PM

hmm


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Posted by: HeloMech Sep 2 2006, 06:30 PM

I voted for the horizontal.

The vertical is a little more appealing as far as being suggestive.. maybe more appealing to guys. The horizontal, however, is better at getting the information across in a cleaner format and still interesting with it's layout.

My 2 cents.

Posted by: cbenitah Sep 2 2006, 06:34 PM

thanks HeloMech,
I spent more time on it as well...

Posted by: anthony Sep 2 2006, 07:48 PM

I like the colors on the first one but I find the graphic of the body weird and distracting - like the peninsulas extending out from the legs under "September 29".

Posted by: KaptKaos Sep 2 2006, 08:02 PM

In the vertical one, the K in weekend makes the girl look like she has a camel toe.

Aside from that, I don't understand the point of view for the second one. Seems like its the back of a station wagon view.

They are both cool tho. Nice work.

Posted by: cbenitah Sep 2 2006, 08:07 PM

you are looking through a window inside a car and next to you there is another car..

thanks

(at least no one said that I should move home)

Posted by: Headrage Sep 2 2006, 10:19 PM

WTF are these? Was it a realy fat girl that still has the excess skin on the inside of her thighs?



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Posted by: Tettster Sep 2 2006, 10:29 PM

Her feet tucked under her, right? She's on her knees.

Posted by: Aaron Cox Sep 2 2006, 10:31 PM

perfect height then.....

anyway... if she is on her knees, what are the big blobs at her knees?

Posted by: Qarl Sep 2 2006, 10:52 PM

I find the font shifts very distracting. italics, straight, bolt, white, black... too much shifting throughout.

Posted by: SGB Sep 2 2006, 11:37 PM

I agree with Karl about the fonts. The top one needs a blocky easily read font to stand out from the girl, I prefer the second - carwindow effect - one. At first I thought it was sunglasses. That would work. Also, they both have too much unformation. It is a big commitment to ask of a reader- make it easy on the eyes and brain....

Posted by: cbenitah Sep 3 2006, 05:04 AM

guys, all the info on the flyers need t o be there. Client told me so.

I like the window one.. i understand sbout the fonts, but to get the desired effect one needs t o add more interest for the viewer when its as much info as it is.. thanks for input though


2 swedish girls in the other room and im on the club site

Posted by: balljoint Sep 3 2006, 06:01 AM

Forget the shape of the girl for a second and look at the shape of the blue area between her legs.


I think it looks like Dean Cain.



Nice work.

Posted by: Qarl Sep 3 2006, 08:21 AM

As a graphics guy, you should tell your client there is too much info on the ad.

I can think of two or three sentences that aren't critical to the ad. I dont' agree that the changes in fonts adds interest. Between the odd shapes and the every-changing fonts, I get a headache. Maybe I'm just turning into an old fart.

You asked for input, I'm just being honest.

Okay... here some more feedback...

Free Weekend Tan "@" September 29-31?

@ = at, right?

Reads... Free Weekend Tan "at" September 29-31st... doesn't make sense to me?

Also... and here it comes...

There are only 30 days in September?

Thank you... now where's my prize?

Otherwise I like #2.... Can you angle the fonts a little to coincide with the angle of the window?

Posted by: cbenitah Sep 3 2006, 04:05 PM

I told him several times that it is to much info, the ad is only 4.75*10 which is not much space and an ackward size..

Sept 31st haha, I didnt look, I just took the text he provided me.. Free Weekend Tan does not make sense to me, but since english is not my first language I dont know..

I was thinking about that so it reads better.. But not sure, I will try though. Thanks for all the feedback.. Back to work again I guess..

Give me a while an I'll post the changes

Posted by: alpha434 Sep 3 2006, 04:24 PM

Move back to sweden, and get back with the supermodel.

Remember, your client's input is more important than ours. bring in both pictures and ask him which one he likes. I the crap doesn't sell, then it's not your problem. You're just the graphics guy, not his marketing director.

Posted by: JPB Sep 3 2006, 07:39 PM

GRAND OPENING needs to be relocated over the cooch area, thank you.


Hello!

Posted by: SGB Sep 3 2006, 08:32 PM

an EXCELLENT idea. places all our other complaints in perspective.


Truely. Sex is used to sell EVERYTHING. I think that is because it works. Also could say "FREE" in big letters across the region of focus.

Posted by: Qarl Sep 3 2006, 10:35 PM

Perhaps the silhouette in the top is giving birth.. and the things between her thighs are baby's legs...

... nah! That would be gross!

Posted by: cbenitah Sep 4 2006, 10:25 PM

K,
Here is another version. I cleaned it up a little and changed some colors to make it "pop" more..

I'm not liking the text to the right to much..

Any advice?


(Notice the new car.. had to put a porsche in there..)


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