EAT . SLEEP . 914, T-Shirt Design Options

[dlo914]

I've had this t-shirt design on my mind for the past few weeks, but never got around to it till tonight. Here's what i've come up with:
IN WHITE PRINT
(IMG:http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h88/danlo830/EATSLEEP914W-B.jpg)

OR

IN BLACK PRINT
(IMG:http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h88/danlo830/EATSLEEP914.jpg)

Examples on a t-shirt (generated images):
(IMG:http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h88/danlo830/WhiteSample.jpg)
(IMG:http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h88/danlo830/BlackSample.jpg)

And the process i went through to get to this design:
Drawn w/ pencil and then penned in:
(IMG:http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h88/danlo830/914drawing.jpg)

Traced in Adobe Illustrator to get the fine thick lines:
(IMG:http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h88/danlo830/914outline.jpg)

Please throw me your feedback, any suggestions are all welcome! I will be making these shirts w/ Oldschool (Jaime) i will be personally printing these shirts myself so i hope that lowers the overall cost of the shirts in the end.

At the moment i'm not sure about the following:
- what font to use?
- what colored shirt?
- what colored print?
- do i need to round the 914 image a bit?
- should there be wording on the front?

[dlo914]

Quoted from clubnarp.com by SECHSER (Jack):

i like it dude, it's looking pretty cool! i could see it being a good exercise to make that 914 as geometrically simple as that burger, and still looks as an obvious 914. i guess it's a good chance for you to show how you could capture that 914ness.. i wonder how the rear view and the side view look like as well. oh, dig that super ultra 911 font man!! this will be a good entrance portfolio piece to get into art center tho

So i tried simplifying the 914 and here's what i came up with. Let me know what you guys think:
(IMG:http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h88/danlo830/Simplified914.jpg)