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> OT: Graphic Design, Need some advicem stared too long at it..
which one is a keeper?
Flyer for Tanning Salon
Vertical? [ 4 ] ** [25.00%]
Horizontal [ 7 ] ** [43.75%]
None? [ 1 ] ** [6.25%]
I need a girl [ 2 ] ** [12.50%]
Send this guy back to Sweden [ 2 ] ** [12.50%]
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cbenitah
post Sep 2 2006, 06:25 PM
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I have been looking at these for a while now and can't make up my mind.. They ar going to be a flyer you hand out. . . .

Thankful for various input. . . .

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post Sep 2 2006, 06:26 PM
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hmm


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post Sep 2 2006, 06:30 PM
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I voted for the horizontal.

The vertical is a little more appealing as far as being suggestive.. maybe more appealing to guys. The horizontal, however, is better at getting the information across in a cleaner format and still interesting with it's layout.

My 2 cents.
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post Sep 2 2006, 06:34 PM
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thanks HeloMech,
I spent more time on it as well...
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post Sep 2 2006, 07:48 PM
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I like the colors on the first one but I find the graphic of the body weird and distracting - like the peninsulas extending out from the legs under "September 29".
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post Sep 2 2006, 08:02 PM
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In the vertical one, the K in weekend makes the girl look like she has a camel toe.

Aside from that, I don't understand the point of view for the second one. Seems like its the back of a station wagon view.

They are both cool tho. Nice work.
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post Sep 2 2006, 08:07 PM
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you are looking through a window inside a car and next to you there is another car..

thanks

(at least no one said that I should move home) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)
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post Sep 2 2006, 10:19 PM
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WTF are these? Was it a realy fat girl that still has the excess skin on the inside of her thighs? (IMG:style_emoticons/default/blink.gif)


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post Sep 2 2006, 10:29 PM
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Her feet tucked under her, right? She's on her knees.
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post Sep 2 2006, 10:31 PM
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perfect height then..... (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

anyway... if she is on her knees, what are the big blobs at her knees?
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post Sep 2 2006, 10:52 PM
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I find the font shifts very distracting. italics, straight, bolt, white, black... too much shifting throughout.
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post Sep 2 2006, 11:37 PM
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I agree with Karl about the fonts. The top one needs a blocky easily read font to stand out from the girl, I prefer the second - carwindow effect - one. At first I thought it was sunglasses. That would work. Also, they both have too much unformation. It is a big commitment to ask of a reader- make it easy on the eyes and brain....
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post Sep 3 2006, 05:04 AM
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guys, all the info on the flyers need t o be there. Client told me so.

I like the window one.. i understand sbout the fonts, but to get the desired effect one needs t o add more interest for the viewer when its as much info as it is.. thanks for input though


2 swedish girls in the other room and im on the club site (IMG:style_emoticons/default/WTF.gif)
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post Sep 3 2006, 06:01 AM
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Forget the shape of the girl for a second and look at the shape of the blue area between her legs. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/blink.gif)


I think it looks like Dean Cain. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)



Nice work.
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post Sep 3 2006, 08:21 AM
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As a graphics guy, you should tell your client there is too much info on the ad.

I can think of two or three sentences that aren't critical to the ad. I dont' agree that the changes in fonts adds interest. Between the odd shapes and the every-changing fonts, I get a headache. Maybe I'm just turning into an old fart.

You asked for input, I'm just being honest.

Okay... here some more feedback...

Free Weekend Tan "@" September 29-31?

@ = at, right?

Reads... Free Weekend Tan "at" September 29-31st... doesn't make sense to me?

Also... and here it comes...

There are only 30 days in September?

Thank you... now where's my prize? (IMG:style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Otherwise I like #2.... Can you angle the fonts a little to coincide with the angle of the window?
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post Sep 3 2006, 04:05 PM
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I told him several times that it is to much info, the ad is only 4.75*10 which is not much space and an ackward size..

Sept 31st haha, I didnt look, I just took the text he provided me.. Free Weekend Tan does not make sense to me, but since english is not my first language I dont know..

I was thinking about that so it reads better.. But not sure, I will try though. Thanks for all the feedback.. Back to work again I guess..

Give me a while an I'll post the changes
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post Sep 3 2006, 04:24 PM
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Move back to sweden, and get back with the supermodel.

Remember, your client's input is more important than ours. bring in both pictures and ask him which one he likes. I the crap doesn't sell, then it's not your problem. You're just the graphics guy, not his marketing director.
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post Sep 3 2006, 07:39 PM
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GRAND OPENING needs to be relocated over the cooch area, thank you.


(IMG:style_emoticons/default/beer.gif) Hello!
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post Sep 3 2006, 08:32 PM
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QUOTE(JPB @ Sep 3 2006, 08:39 PM) *

GRAND OPENING needs to be relocated over the cooch area, thank you.


(IMG:style_emoticons/default/beer.gif) Hello!

(IMG:style_emoticons/default/beerchug.gif)

an EXCELLENT idea. places all our other complaints in perspective.


Truely. Sex is used to sell EVERYTHING. I think that is because it works. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Also could say "FREE" in big letters across the region of focus.
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post Sep 3 2006, 10:35 PM
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Perhaps the silhouette in the top is giving birth.. and the things between her thighs are baby's legs...

... nah! That would be gross!

(IMG:style_emoticons/default/confused24.gif)
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